Ashley Pence
November 23, 2007
Aims & Objectives:
These past two weeks are likely to have been my most stressful yet unstressful at the same time. To begin with my aim was to have completed the posts prior to Friday before Thanksgiving break. This also meant completing my final draft for my paper as well as preparing to take the GRE that same Friday morning. Things were a little shook up after I realized that I had an extra week to complete all the posts excluding my final draft of the I-Search paper. Once that was realized I devoted all my time to preparing for the GRE. We all know what that means, the posts were slightly forgotten. Although I knew that I would enjoy writing the posts for this week they were drown out by family and turkey. Now we see the unstressful part of my previous two weeks. I loved this past week due to the excitement of family and shopping and sleeping in. I even worked on homework for other classes, but the posts for CD 315 never crossed my mind. That is until 7 a.m. on black Friday. You know the biggest shopping day of the year. I was rudely awaken by a dream of explaining to Mrs. McComas why my posts were so much later than usual and thanking her for giving us two weeks to do them. Funny how life has a way of reminding us of things we have forgotten. Therefore we all know now why I am submitting all my posts in one night.
Declarative Knowledge:
I have learned much needed information on how to give and take constructive criticism. Although I gave and took this criticism in the previous week I really worked on the things that were mentioned. It was interesting to see my paper through another person’s eyes and hopefully my criticism helped them as much as theirs helped me. I also learned about writing a preface, acknowledgements and about the author.
Procedural Knowledge:
My first experience this week was learning how to revise my paper by using the review that my fellow students provided me with. This allowed me to see what I had done good, bad and what could use some work. No editing was done on spelling or any other grammatical errors so hopefully I was capable and successful at catching any of those. By only reviewing the content of my paper this revealed some mistakes that I may have made in expressing my research in order to effectively get my point across to the audience. The content was praised as well as given constructive criticism which guided me in see where my strengths and weaknesses were.
When learning about writing a preface, acknowledgements and about the author I realized that I had never had to do something like this, but always knew that it was something that every author does. I began by writing about how and why I chose my research question. This was considered writing my preface. I then wrote my acknowledgements. I liked doing this the most because I feel like everyone needs to be recognized for things done well. This allowed me to give thanks and credit to those who inspired me along the way while writing my paper. Writing about the author was less like the preface and acknowledgements seeing as it had everything to do with me. I basically wrote a bibliography about myself, but included only current information about my education, plans and a little about my hobbies.
Conditional Knowledge:
This week has prepared me for the future by teaching me how to revise by using reviews of my research content. By learning this I not only made my paper better, but I can now do the same thing with future papers. I learned so much about family culture and why it is so important as well since I had to continuously be involved with the topic and research of my paper. I am thankful for this oppurtunity and hope that the information that I have gained does not fade.